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juice. by CheyenneDrake juice. by CheyenneDrake
medium - charcoal

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The first word that comes to my mind is "Awesome". :D The concept is cool and your technique is very good. It has a lot of detail, but nothing stands out too much so it´s easy to notice allmost everything :) If I had to critisize something, it would be the lower glass. I think that it lacks a bit depth. Also the water looks somehow non-natural. Other than that it´s very well done. I like the way you use shading to bring out the detail. Overall it´s an interesting piece of art with only a few flaws that keep it from reaching perfection ;)
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This is a beautiful piece, that needs a second or third look too really see the beauty in this. I am not someone who works well with charcoal since it is so messy, and is hard to work with. Though you have made it looks so simple, and easy to use in this piece. The texture you managed to work out in the water is stunning, and the little fish in the bottom glass with the dolphin diving into the bottom glass from the stream is simple astoundingly dynamic and beautiful. The concept is very original, and the composition is gorgeous! Very nicely done! ^^
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violinist2424 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much :huggle:
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violinist2424 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
np
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:iconirinthony:
irinthony Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow this is amazing for traditional art! (:
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much
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Riolama Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Brilliant :)
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :meow:
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jonesblachowicz Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Photographer
GREAT concept and composition. The shapes of the glasses could use some work, and the bubbles in the glass could definitely be more spherical. The water doesn't seem to be flowing as natural as it could be---it's not perfect, it splatters, bubbles, churns, etc. The dolphin and top fish are pretty much perfect, the last fish could use a tad more shading and the water in general could use some attention---try to work some studies on water, it's movement, and reflective properties. It'll help. a lot. I've tried drawing glass before and can be super frustrating, but if you master it, it'll be all that more impressive.
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! I appreciate this a lot.
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TarcDnB Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012   Traditional Artist
Nice work, maybe work on proportions a little, it will be fine :)
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you, I will :D
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:iconmeregoddess:
meregoddess Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have no idea how you draw such realistic water! It's fabulous! I wish I could do that.
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I wonder myself if I'll even ever be able to draw water again ^^; it was my first time, but thank you :3
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YaensArt Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's pretty nice, I like the strong contrast. It looks quite realistic, especially on the thumbnail because of which I thought it was a photo.
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ♥
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YaensArt Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, of course.
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Vissyscrafts Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Great concept, it looks nice.
I love how you draw water too, it looks pretty realistic ^^
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much, it was hard, haha. :3
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JNIKEL Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Good job on getting your values to pop, using proper contrast is one of the most effective ways to make a piece stand out and grab the viewer's attention, this is the best piece in your gallery.

Keep making stuff like this and work on increasing your detail and compositional skills and you will go far.

I dig it.
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much!
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Fey-R Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very interesting idea. And nice done, but you still need practice ;)
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course. I'm only just beginning :D
Thank you.
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:iconfey-r:
Fey-R Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ;)
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Trichardsen Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Professional Photographer
Water is really one of the hardest things to draw properly, water and glass is very hard, water, glass and fish, well you are almost setting yourself up to fail from the start, but I do not think you did.

What you have here is a very stylistic drawing with really creative and original approach, if there was something Id want changed ( this is just my 2 cents ) it´s that the water seems very close to the edge of the mug so it makes the mug appear to have extremely thin glass, almost brittle.
You got a cool drawing here.
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much. Constructive criticism always helps ♥
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Trichardsen Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Professional Photographer
You´re welcome.

It is just my take on this, it is a kick ass drawing. :)
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Fro7a Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist


Brilliant concept

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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much :huggle:
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:iconfro7a:
Fro7a Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist


Anytime

~:rose:'
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kittenis21 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love the dolphin and how it blends seemlessly into the glasses. very nice composition and very interesting!
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! :meow:
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dragonoids Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This looks cool!
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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dragonoids Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No worries at all!
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bhmor Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. ♥
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boredNovelist Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
How neat. I'm fascinated by this concept. Beautifully done.
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you.
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boredNovelist Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
You're welcome!
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Anj3lla Featured By Owner May 8, 2012   General Artist
Really dig the concept...Great work on details and shading.:heart:
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconouijaplayer:
Ouijaplayer Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Very nice! Great concept and great work with the liquid.
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ♥
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Daws3 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012   General Artist
Neat! and well done!
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :)
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theywillsuffice Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
lovely!
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you ♥
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
Very interesting piece. I like the concept and shading :)
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:iconcheyennedrake:
CheyenneDrake Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :huggle:
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
You're welcome :)
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